I love to listen to Pandoras Chill/ Downtempo channel. It never fails to set the mood for writing. It's contemplative, mind altering, and mood expansive. It will take you places; and for me, it boosts my writing output. What do you listen to when writing? Do you have a certain song that will always help you break through the vaulted writers block wall? For me, it's Mark Farina or......Groove Amarda.
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Sunday, September 29, 2013
Sunday, September 22, 2013
An Introduction to The First
He flew low, just
feet above the water’s surface. He wasn’t sure if their radar could pick him
up, but it wasn’t worth risking. Even though their surface to air defenses
posed no threat to him, it could slow him down; and right now, time was of the
essence. He stayed just under the speed of sound, not wanting to trigger the
high velocity speed sensors placed on buoys that bobbed intermittently on the
ocean's surface. Even still, the water split, rising in twin walls, and pulled
upward in the wake of his passing. He pitched his hearing towards his
objective, and could hear the increase in the pitch of the voices. The
tightening of the vocal cords, and their rapid-fire heartbeats told him that he
was running out of time. He would have to risk the attention of their defenses
if he was going to make it on time.
With little effort,
The First accelerated, blasting past the sound barrier and arching higher into
the air. The shoreline was in view, and again he accelerated, hoping that he
would be past whatever defenses they might have before they could lock onto
him. He heard the air raid sirens blast in the distance, triggering their
anti-aircraft weapons. The air around him lit up as tracer fire and flares
marked his location. He heard the hypersonic scream of air being split, and
felt the pressure wave ahead of the first artillery shell that struck him in
the chest. At least in the air he didn’t have to worry about controlling the
deflection of it, steering the debris so that it would not hit innocent
bystanders. Instead he just let the mortar hit him and explode harmlessly.
He instantly marked
the half buried turret that had fired on him, but rather than advance on it, he
spun in mid air, his hearing detecting the sounds of approaching jets. The
surface to air attack had been meant to keep him busy while the fighters
approached from behind, hoping to take him out unaware. He accelerated through
the air towards the first fighter, banking left at the last minute as the jet
rolled right. He glanced back to track which way it would come at him again,
when he realized that the second fighter had taken the opportunity to get a
lock on him from his right side and was firing. The atmosphere around him
crackled as twin barrel twenty-three millimeter cannons strafed him. Armor piercing,
three hundred and twenty gram rounds hit him at over three thousand rounds per
minute.
Despite himself, he
flinched as the shells bounced off his skin. He turned in the air and
accelerated away from the first jet. He listened for the roar of the turbines
as the plane accelerated to keep pace with him. He let the craft draw closer
and waited until it once again began to lock onto him. Before another barrage
of rounds could be unleashed on him, he turned in mid air to face the craft.
Flying backwards, he slowed his pace and let the jet fly into him. It was a
Jian-10 fighter; designed for air-to-air and air-to-ground fighting. But most
of all, it was designed for speed; a flattened silhouette, and extreme
aerodynamic profile gave it the ability to achieve supersonic speeds.
Unfortunately, the long, sleek nose cone ended in an antennae shaped projectile
that easily fit under The First’s powerful arms. As the second jet shot passed
them, it looked like The First had simply grabbed the one billion dollar fighter
in mid air; much like a rodeo cowboy would wrangle a steer to the ground.
Inertia caused the
plane to begin to crumple and tear itself apart as its forward thrust came to a
stop. He ripped the nose unit from the body of the now shattered craft, and
tore it into two pieces. He turned, spotting the now banking second jet just as
the wreckage became a giant fireball around him, and hurled one of the metallic
pieces at the circling jet. With the same fluid motion, he swung around and
hurled the second piece of the plane at the ground. One piece of shrapnel tore
through the second fighter plane, shearing through it like tissue paper. The
second hit the base turret with the force of an MX missile, tearing through
layers of concrete and steel to destroy the targeting system that ran the
ground to air weapons array that had first attacked him.
He sped on,
streaking towards his destination. Five miles, and barely seconds later, he
zeroed in on what appeared to be a desolate area of desert just outside of
large shantytown that was built at the base of a mountain. He dropped from the
sky feet first, his landing sending a tremor through the ramshackle constructs
that passed for houses. A few children that were kicking a ball in a nearby
field stopped to gawk at the imposing figure that fell from the sky.
The First had landed
straddling a hatch that had been spray painted the color of the ground around
it. Roughly five feet in diameter, there was a circular, iron wheel attached to
it that controlled the locking mechanism. He had spotted the imposing brown
tank that had rolled up to within fifty feet of the hidden entrance from the
air. It would present no threat to him, and he had intended to ignore it, but
he realized that while it posed no threat to him, the same could not be said
for the throng of children that were now gathering to stare in his direction.
He heard the rumbling of the big engines that powered the tank, and the
distinctive metal on metal grinding of the cannon swinging around to target
him.
The first shot was a
direct hit, striking him in his back as he bent to grab the wheel that was
bolted onto the latch. The explosion was deafening and he could hear the
children scream and begin to run in all directions. He grasped the top of the
latch with both hands and wrenched it free from the ground. He held the steel
lid in his hands as he turned to face the tank. As casually as one of the
children might toss a Frisbee, he threw it at the tank. The lid struck the
opening of the cannon, splitting it into pieces as it burrowed through the
front of the tank and drove the entire machine backwards and into the ground.
Just as the lid was
impacting the tank, The First was already deep within the underground
structure, the terror filled voices drawing him to the center of the hidden
construct. A two feet thick steel door crashed open under his fist and he
walked into the central control room. Ten sets of eyes stared at him, their
fear turning to awe.
“Where is it,” he
said in perfect Farsi.
No one moved, until
a single scientist stepped forward, his hand shaking as he pointed to a grey
and black metallic box, about four cubic feet in size.
“What is it,” The
First asked.
“It’s an RDD. A
Radiological Dispersal Device. A dirty bomb.” Still, none of the other
scientists in the room had spoken or moved. “When we realized what it was, that
it was armed, we brought it down here, but it won’t matter. From what we can
tell, the explosive device inside is only designed to propel the radioactive
isotopes inside into the air. The ventilation system in this control area will
automatically vent the contaminant outside into the atmosphere. It will―”
“Shut up you fool!”
One of the other scientist had found his voice and rushed over to the where
they stood looking at the bomb. “This is an agent of the Americans! We will be
put to death for even speaking to him―”
“I don’t care,” said
the first scientist. “We are dead anyway. When this thing explodes, everyone
within twenty-five miles will die a very slow and agonizing death! If he can
stop it―”
“I can’t,” said The
First. “How long before the detonation?”
The two scientists
looked at one another, before the second finally shook his head and moved away,
a look of sadness and acceptance flooding his face. He looked at his watch, and
laughed. “Just inside of one minute.”
The first scientist
swallowed hard and turned to The First. “It wasn’t supposed to be live. I don’t
know how it became armed―”
He was cut off as
the First stepped forward and picked the box up, and leaped skyward. He flew
straight up, blasting effortlessly through tons of concrete and steel that
separated the bunker from the outside. He powered through the earth and into
the open, accelerating on contact with the air. The sonic boom and scorched air
were all that marked his passing. In the blink of an eye he achieved escaper
velocity, and within the span of a couple of human heartbeats, he was at the
Earth’s upper atmosphere. There he paused his ascent, drawing back one heavily
muscled arm to throw the box as hard and as far as he could. It instantly
disappeared into the heavens, but he watched it until he saw the detonation,
far away from the earth, where the vacuum of space absorbed the radiation,
gently scattering it along the solar winds.
The First turned and
flew back towards Earth, gently altering his trajectory to take him back to the
United States, no longer concerned with the actions of a few madmen bent on
genocide. He was confident his latest display would give them something to
think about before they again tried perfecting their weapons on their own
people.
The underground
Bunker was quiet. The ten scientists that had been cowering in fear were all
dead. They had been lined up single file against the wall, and shot through the
left eye at point blank range.
A tall, older man,
with striking white hair stood in the center of the room. He cradled a laptop
in one outstretched arm that worked hard to download the data from the array of
sensors that were hidden throughout the complex. Two guards stood at attention
by the entry, eyes fixed on the thin figure in the room.
“Well that was a
mess,” came a voice over the Bluetooth earpiece the man wore in one ear. “Those
scientists were some of your brightest. Was it really necessary to waste such
talent?”
“They were more than
expendable,” he replied.
“Well, at least we
know the alien is working with the American government somehow. They are controlling
him. But other than that, we have nothing to show for six weeks of research and
development. Those isotopes were not cheap you know.”
Oh, I wouldn’t say
it was a failure,” said the old man. He smiled as he walked over to where the
dirty bomb had been sitting. He looked up at the hole made by The First as he
had flown out. Metal and rock shrapnel had rained down onto the spot where he
stood. He bent over and picked up a piece of razor sharp alloy. He lifted it
carefully and held it up the light. A single drop of blackish fluid was
contained on the tip of it. “I wouldn’t say it was a failure at all.”
Back to Basics for American Horror Story?
Here's a picture of the new American Horror Story: Covens poster. I can't tell you how excited I am for the return of this amazing show. I'm even more excited that this season will deal with the oldest, and most endearing of the supernaturals: witches. Vampires and werewolves may be coming to the end of their cycle. While some might say that zombies are the new vampires, I personally will always rank witches at the top of my list for favorite, supernatural characters. They've been around in literature for centuries, and there is a reason they endure. They are the originators of things that go bump in the night, and can't wait to see what AHS does to this classic., Count me all in.
Friday, September 20, 2013
Why Hollywood Fears Wonder Woman
So. I was watching The Avengers, for the hundredth time; and for the hundredth time I caught myself wondering why there has't been a good movie made with a strong, powerful female superhero in the lead. I know what you're thinking; there has been! Catwoman and Elektra come to mind, but do we really consider those good movies? Elektra is an amazing character, one of my all time favorites. but let's face it, the movie version sucked. And don't get me started on Catwoman. That was just an excuse for some Halle Berry fanboy to show off her amazing ass and great breasts. That may sound sexist, but so was the movie. It was basically about Sharon Stone's freakout at growing older and finding a wrinkle. The whole premise was preposterous and an insult to powerful women everywhere. While I applaud Hollywood for making a quasi-attempt at these, I always find myself coming back to the same thought: why don't they do Wonder Woman?
Yeah, I know, her origin and backstory could be tricky. how do you handle a Goddess who was molded from clay, bought to life by the Gods, and raised on an island of immortal beautiful women, and then goes on to champion equal rights in "Man's World"? Well, for starters, you could just borrow from the current origin story that tells us she is a daughter of Zeus. That would work; I mean, that horny old man was nailing everything back in the day. Who knows how many children he's dropped. But whatever you decide to do with her, it can be done. Hell, I've got dozens of workable ideas for a live action movie, and I'm sure there are plenty of others out there that do as well.
But I don't think that is Hollywoods problem. I know someone like JOSS WHEDON could handle her, without resulting to having her run around half naked on a beach with other women trying to cater to teen age boys more sapphic-minded fantasies. He cold make her what she is: strong, honest, truthful, respectful....and best of all, the most kick-ass of all the kick-asses out there. But he, or Zack, or anyone else will probably never get that chance, because when it comes down to it, Hollywood isn't afraid they can't sell Wonder Woman. They are afraid, the can't sell Wonder Woman. Because what makes a great Hollywood summer action blockbuster? Merchandising. That's right, the toys, and action figures, and Lego this and Lego that tie ins. And H-wood is afraid they can't pimp the Amazon out enough without looking like they are pimping her.
They can't turn her into an action figure and sell her because boys play with action figures. but Wonder Woman wouldn't be an action figure; she'd be a doll. God forbid little Billy down the street play with a doll; no, daddy would never have that. Little girls may want to be her, but would they really want to play with her and Barbie together, making them share Ken? Gross. That isn't Wonder Woman either and H-wood knows that. So whom do they target to make this movie a success? I'm not sure women would go to it enough to make it a success. I don't think men would be enough to drive it either, because unless she's naked and tied down, I'm not sure many straight men would admit to enjoying a female action star. So who does that leave to carry her? The DC fanboys? But I'm not sure we're enough to persuade a studio to invest the 100 million plus it would take to do Her justice.
No. I think we have to wait and hope for a Justice League movie. Hopefully she will be there for more than just carrying Batman's utility belt or dancing around Superman's cape.
What are your thoughts on the Amazing Amazon? We know it can be done, but will it ever be done?
#Wonder Woman, #Superhero, #Justice League, #Batman, #Superman
Yeah, I know, her origin and backstory could be tricky. how do you handle a Goddess who was molded from clay, bought to life by the Gods, and raised on an island of immortal beautiful women, and then goes on to champion equal rights in "Man's World"? Well, for starters, you could just borrow from the current origin story that tells us she is a daughter of Zeus. That would work; I mean, that horny old man was nailing everything back in the day. Who knows how many children he's dropped. But whatever you decide to do with her, it can be done. Hell, I've got dozens of workable ideas for a live action movie, and I'm sure there are plenty of others out there that do as well.
But I don't think that is Hollywoods problem. I know someone like JOSS WHEDON could handle her, without resulting to having her run around half naked on a beach with other women trying to cater to teen age boys more sapphic-minded fantasies. He cold make her what she is: strong, honest, truthful, respectful....and best of all, the most kick-ass of all the kick-asses out there. But he, or Zack, or anyone else will probably never get that chance, because when it comes down to it, Hollywood isn't afraid they can't sell Wonder Woman. They are afraid, the can't sell Wonder Woman. Because what makes a great Hollywood summer action blockbuster? Merchandising. That's right, the toys, and action figures, and Lego this and Lego that tie ins. And H-wood is afraid they can't pimp the Amazon out enough without looking like they are pimping her.
They can't turn her into an action figure and sell her because boys play with action figures. but Wonder Woman wouldn't be an action figure; she'd be a doll. God forbid little Billy down the street play with a doll; no, daddy would never have that. Little girls may want to be her, but would they really want to play with her and Barbie together, making them share Ken? Gross. That isn't Wonder Woman either and H-wood knows that. So whom do they target to make this movie a success? I'm not sure women would go to it enough to make it a success. I don't think men would be enough to drive it either, because unless she's naked and tied down, I'm not sure many straight men would admit to enjoying a female action star. So who does that leave to carry her? The DC fanboys? But I'm not sure we're enough to persuade a studio to invest the 100 million plus it would take to do Her justice.
No. I think we have to wait and hope for a Justice League movie. Hopefully she will be there for more than just carrying Batman's utility belt or dancing around Superman's cape.
What are your thoughts on the Amazing Amazon? We know it can be done, but will it ever be done?
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Friday, September 6, 2013
Smashwords announces agreement with Oyster
Smashwords has announced a new distribution deal with Oyster, a subscription service for eBooks. Oyster is offering an all you can eat, er, read service for $9.99 per month. By signing a distribution deal with them, Smashwords can now ship their titles to Oyster as a part of Oyster's library. Basically, this is Smashwords answer to Amazon's KDP Select program, which allows Amazon's Prime members to download and read a book for free. Smashwords will allow any author to opt in or out of the program, and while they have not released the compensation structure for authors, Smashwords founder Mark Coker states that it will be beneficial to indie authors. One big difference between this and Select will be that Oyster does not require exclusivity. You can opt in to the model and continue to sell your books on whatever other sites you are currently using. The only caveat for entrance into Oyster is that your Smashwords book be in their Prime catalogue.
Personally, I have mixed thoughts on the subject. One of the things about Amazon that made me shy away from Select, was the exclusivity agreement. I want to get my work in front of as many eyes as possible, and while Amazon may be a Juggernaut, they aren't the only game in town. Plus, let's face it, their shelves are packed lately, and getting seen in their store is getting harder and harder. I'm still a firm believer in the adage that if you write a good story, the readers will find you. But spreading your work out to as many distributers as possible can only help. Plus, I've heard many authors complain that their sales began to tank the minute that Select was created. Why would someone pay full price for a book if they can find something else on Select for free?
If the author compensation is as good as Coker is saying it will be, then why not take advantage of it? Especially if the deal comes with the equivalent push of exposure and marketing that Select members receive from Amazon. Just like with internet radio and Netflix, it appears that subscription services are trending, and we as authors need to get on board with the new model and figure out a way to make it work, or we start swimming against the current and drown. Coker is stating that 72 hours prior to the implementation of distribution, he will email all current authors in the Smashwords library to detail the payment structure. That gives me some time to think; but in all honesty, what is there to think about? Time to get cracking on the next novel. As always, looks like the more quality content you produce, the better off you are going to be. Sound off below, what are your thoughts on going free?
Personally, I have mixed thoughts on the subject. One of the things about Amazon that made me shy away from Select, was the exclusivity agreement. I want to get my work in front of as many eyes as possible, and while Amazon may be a Juggernaut, they aren't the only game in town. Plus, let's face it, their shelves are packed lately, and getting seen in their store is getting harder and harder. I'm still a firm believer in the adage that if you write a good story, the readers will find you. But spreading your work out to as many distributers as possible can only help. Plus, I've heard many authors complain that their sales began to tank the minute that Select was created. Why would someone pay full price for a book if they can find something else on Select for free?
If the author compensation is as good as Coker is saying it will be, then why not take advantage of it? Especially if the deal comes with the equivalent push of exposure and marketing that Select members receive from Amazon. Just like with internet radio and Netflix, it appears that subscription services are trending, and we as authors need to get on board with the new model and figure out a way to make it work, or we start swimming against the current and drown. Coker is stating that 72 hours prior to the implementation of distribution, he will email all current authors in the Smashwords library to detail the payment structure. That gives me some time to think; but in all honesty, what is there to think about? Time to get cracking on the next novel. As always, looks like the more quality content you produce, the better off you are going to be. Sound off below, what are your thoughts on going free?
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Thursday, September 5, 2013
Batwoman Back Into The Closet?
So I just learned that the creative team behind Batwoman will be leaving the title over "creative differences" with DC involving the depiction of Batwoman's wedding to her female partner. Partner? No, let me clarify that. In comics, partner can always mean sidekick, or business partner, or any number of non-sexual couplings. But in this case, partner means lover; as in betrothed, girlfriend, wife. Apparently, something about that has miffed the executives at DC. Now, according to an official statement from the creative team of J.H Williams III and W. Haden Blackman, there were other factors involved; like last minute changes to the story arcs at the eleventh hour, and being asked to completely disregard long standing story arcs that would have negatively impacted the character and the series. But the final straw appears to have been a directive to not show any part of the wedding between Kate Kane, Batwoman, and her lover Maggie.
The series has had a rocky road from it's inception, with previous talent also leaving due to "creative differences". But through it all, Batwoman has persevered. She has even managed to carve out her own personality from the every growing members of the Bat Family. She wasn't a girl, or anyone's sidekick, nor did she herself need a sidekick. She was smart, resourceful, and could throw a roundhouse kick to rival the main Bat himself. She was troubled, and faced her demons head on. She dealt with mature themes in a mature way...and that included her complex relationship with her girlfriend. Forget the fact that she is gay, just look at her relationship for what it is: two grown ups dealing with all of the many faceted aspects of an adult relationship. Navigating waters of trust, love, lust and responsibility. I repeat, she is an adult in an adult relationship. One that might not have been perfect, but that is what made it all the more real. It may sound cliched, but I am sure that somewhere there is a young, feisty lesbian in the making that reads this comic and thinks, "Hell yeah, this is who I need to be more like". It gave hope and visibility to so many LGBT youth (and adults) that they do have representation. A voice from someone who must understand how they think, and wants them to know that there is nothing wrong or different about you. You're going to have the same ups and downs in dealing with whoever you choose to love that everyone else in mainstream media has. But don't dispare...you're not alone.
But now, we're told that Batwoman can't be seen married to another woman. What the fuck is that about? You put a positive role model out there, and then do an about face and tell everyone she should be ashamed of who she loves? Not cool at all. Send her high kicking back into the closet. Everyone involved is stating this is not because of her sexual orientation. Well, I call bullshit on that. She can be a lesbian, but don't show any proof of who she is. Why not just make her a nun? Better she renounce all sex than have the wrong kind of sex. DC, I know it doesn't matter to you, but maybe you need to look at what's going on in your house lately. You have very talented people working for you...well, not as many as you used to have, but there is still talent there. Listen to them. They know their audience. That is what makes some of your creatives so special...they have their finger on the pulse of their audience. Let them do what they do best. Trust them. you were making history with this title. Do the right thing; don't wake up in five years, and find you're on the wrong side of that history.
#Batwoman
The series has had a rocky road from it's inception, with previous talent also leaving due to "creative differences". But through it all, Batwoman has persevered. She has even managed to carve out her own personality from the every growing members of the Bat Family. She wasn't a girl, or anyone's sidekick, nor did she herself need a sidekick. She was smart, resourceful, and could throw a roundhouse kick to rival the main Bat himself. She was troubled, and faced her demons head on. She dealt with mature themes in a mature way...and that included her complex relationship with her girlfriend. Forget the fact that she is gay, just look at her relationship for what it is: two grown ups dealing with all of the many faceted aspects of an adult relationship. Navigating waters of trust, love, lust and responsibility. I repeat, she is an adult in an adult relationship. One that might not have been perfect, but that is what made it all the more real. It may sound cliched, but I am sure that somewhere there is a young, feisty lesbian in the making that reads this comic and thinks, "Hell yeah, this is who I need to be more like". It gave hope and visibility to so many LGBT youth (and adults) that they do have representation. A voice from someone who must understand how they think, and wants them to know that there is nothing wrong or different about you. You're going to have the same ups and downs in dealing with whoever you choose to love that everyone else in mainstream media has. But don't dispare...you're not alone.
But now, we're told that Batwoman can't be seen married to another woman. What the fuck is that about? You put a positive role model out there, and then do an about face and tell everyone she should be ashamed of who she loves? Not cool at all. Send her high kicking back into the closet. Everyone involved is stating this is not because of her sexual orientation. Well, I call bullshit on that. She can be a lesbian, but don't show any proof of who she is. Why not just make her a nun? Better she renounce all sex than have the wrong kind of sex. DC, I know it doesn't matter to you, but maybe you need to look at what's going on in your house lately. You have very talented people working for you...well, not as many as you used to have, but there is still talent there. Listen to them. They know their audience. That is what makes some of your creatives so special...they have their finger on the pulse of their audience. Let them do what they do best. Trust them. you were making history with this title. Do the right thing; don't wake up in five years, and find you're on the wrong side of that history.
#Batwoman
Tuesday, September 3, 2013
Amazon Announces Matchbook
At long last, Amazon seems to be addressing something that fans of eBooks have long clamored for. Sort of. As a major reader of electronic books, and a devoted Kindle app user on my iPad, I've often looked at my trove of physical books and wondered if I should go to the expense of replacing them with electronic versions. I've also wondered why the electronic version of a book weren't included in the purchase of an eBook. Much like they now bundle Blu-Ray, DVD and the electronic version of movies. It seems like Amazon is now addressing this with their MatchBook program. Essentially, you can now download the electronic version of any book you have ever purchased from them for a fee. That fee ranges from free to $2.99. Not bad; I could definitely swing that on some of the physical purchases I've made. Tell me, do you think this is a good thing, and does it really benefit you? Moving forward, I don't see myself going back to purchasing physical books, but looking back? Yes, there are a few that I will hunt for to replace. I'm sitting here, in my home library, surrounded by all my old books as I write this, and I'm thinking; what could I do with this room if I were to replace all these shelves of books with one slim, beautifully designed, tablet? I don't know if I could bring myself to do it, but it's a tempting thought. Maybe I'll cruise around on Amazon, after downloading a few eBooks, and see what kind of pool tables they have in stock.
Sound off in the comments section below if you think Amazon's MatchBook program is a pro or con to the book lover.
Sound off in the comments section below if you think Amazon's MatchBook program is a pro or con to the book lover.
Monday, September 2, 2013
And it's On to the Next One
Whew. Well, while I'm happy to have finished my first novel, and am ecstatic to see it posted on Amazon, B&N, and iBooks, I've decided I can't sit back on my laurels waiting for sales to take off. In all honesty, with it being my first novel, it's going rather slow. But that fact that a few people have seen it and purchased it, makes me smile on the inside. I knowSuperheroes aren't everyone's cup of tea, but I have always had a thing for them. Larger than life, saving the day, swooping in to banish away all the eveil that lurks in the dark. That was my idea of superheroes as a kid. As an adult, I started to think, "No way would these guys act like this in the real world". They're human, with human flaws, and human desires. I think their powers would just allow them to act on their most base desires. Not everyone of course, but enough of them. That's the world I'm creating. A single mother in an abusive relationship and what happens one fateful evening when she has a literal run in with what will eventually become Earth's First true superhero. It's by turns dark and horrific, but also uplifting. A tribute to friendship and love; and what can happen when you have to trust your life to those around you.
I don't know how it will sell, or if it will ever find an audience, but I'm proud of it. Now, having said that, I'm not going to look at my sales reports or sit around trying to find a way to market it. No, I think the best marketing I can do is to get the next book out, and the next after that. It's back to writing for me. After all, that's when I'm happiest. There is so much going on in my head right now that I have to get it out. Hope you'll join me on the ride. Oh, and if you're curious, you can find excerpts from my novel here.
Thanks for listening,
MJ
I don't know how it will sell, or if it will ever find an audience, but I'm proud of it. Now, having said that, I'm not going to look at my sales reports or sit around trying to find a way to market it. No, I think the best marketing I can do is to get the next book out, and the next after that. It's back to writing for me. After all, that's when I'm happiest. There is so much going on in my head right now that I have to get it out. Hope you'll join me on the ride. Oh, and if you're curious, you can find excerpts from my novel here.
Thanks for listening,
MJ
Sunday, September 1, 2013
Are There Really Perks to Being a Wallflower?
So last night I watched one of my all time favorite movies, The Perks of Being a Wallflower. Normally, I wouldn't go for a movie like that. It had some things in it that I typically avoid; namely teenage angst and high school. Typically I would run from a movie like that quicker than I would that two dollar hooker that hangs around outside a nearby 7-11. But this one drew in; in no part because of the cast involved. Emma Watson and Ezra Miller led the charge; and bringing up the rear was Kate Walsh, Dylan McDermott, Joan Cusak, and Mr. Never-A-Bad-Performance Paul Rudd. Ok. I'll admit it. Really it was Paul Rudd that made me check out the movie. The man could read the fine print on an insurance contract aloud and I'd watch. But I digress...
The story revolves around high school freshman, Charlie and his longing to fit in while battling emotional demons resulting from a personal tragedy and the suicide of his best friend. The movie revolves around Charlie and the new group of friends he makes, primarily step siblings Sam, whom he develops a crush on, and her brother Patrick, whom develops a crush on Charlie. Charlie, of course, is your typical Wallflower. Always on the outside looking in; hoping to find a kindred soul to whom he can relate. He finds that he isn't alone, and that there is a common bond in being an outsider; strength in numbers, even if those numbers are among the unseen of the high school hierarchy. What I'm wondering however, is does this really happen? When I was in high school, I had the luck of being one of the more popular kids. I was an athlete and an academic, so I moved easily in both worlds. But I remember seeing the Charlies of the school. The loners that sat alone, buried in their books, forever being teased because they lived on the lowest rung of the social ladder. I never took part in the teasing. I never came up behind someone and knocked their books out from under their arms, which seemed to be the easiest way to make someone an instant point of laughter and mocking attention. As a matter of fact, I would on occasion stop and help that person pick everything up. But I never went out of my way to extend my hand to one of these Wallflowers. Partially because I didn't think they would accept a hand, but also, because I didn't think they had anything to offer me in return. Watching this movie has made me wonder: what exactly are the Perks of Being a Wallflower? I'd love to hear from any past or present Wallflowers out there. Oh, and parents; this is an excellent movie to watch with your teens...no matter where they stand in High Schools Hierarchy. If anything, always tell your children that they can do better than accepting the love they think they deserve. Watch the movie; you'll get it.
#perks, #wallflower, #high school
The story revolves around high school freshman, Charlie and his longing to fit in while battling emotional demons resulting from a personal tragedy and the suicide of his best friend. The movie revolves around Charlie and the new group of friends he makes, primarily step siblings Sam, whom he develops a crush on, and her brother Patrick, whom develops a crush on Charlie. Charlie, of course, is your typical Wallflower. Always on the outside looking in; hoping to find a kindred soul to whom he can relate. He finds that he isn't alone, and that there is a common bond in being an outsider; strength in numbers, even if those numbers are among the unseen of the high school hierarchy. What I'm wondering however, is does this really happen? When I was in high school, I had the luck of being one of the more popular kids. I was an athlete and an academic, so I moved easily in both worlds. But I remember seeing the Charlies of the school. The loners that sat alone, buried in their books, forever being teased because they lived on the lowest rung of the social ladder. I never took part in the teasing. I never came up behind someone and knocked their books out from under their arms, which seemed to be the easiest way to make someone an instant point of laughter and mocking attention. As a matter of fact, I would on occasion stop and help that person pick everything up. But I never went out of my way to extend my hand to one of these Wallflowers. Partially because I didn't think they would accept a hand, but also, because I didn't think they had anything to offer me in return. Watching this movie has made me wonder: what exactly are the Perks of Being a Wallflower? I'd love to hear from any past or present Wallflowers out there. Oh, and parents; this is an excellent movie to watch with your teens...no matter where they stand in High Schools Hierarchy. If anything, always tell your children that they can do better than accepting the love they think they deserve. Watch the movie; you'll get it.
#perks, #wallflower, #high school
Saturday, August 31, 2013
Do You Follow Elmore's 10 Rules?
I was always a fan of Elmore Leonard's style. His prose was direct and to the point. How many of his 10 Rules of Writing do you break? More importantly, which ones do you never break?
- Never open a book with weather.
- Avoid prologues.
- Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue.
- Never use an adverb to modify the verb "said” … he admonished gravely.
- Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose.
- Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose."
- Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
- Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
- Don't go into great detail describing places and things.
- Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.
I always try to follow number eight. I want my readers to build an idea of my characters in their heads, thereby building a much deeper connection with the character.
What are your thoughts?
#Elmore #writing #novel #rules
One of my new favorite design finds is the Knomo carrying case for my MacBook Air. The cases come in two sizes, 11 inch and 13 inch to correspond to the size of the Airs. All I have to say if I love it. I searched high and low for something to cary my MacBook in. The problem is, the Air is such a beautiful work of art in itself. Apple spares no expense when it comes to making sure their products are as beautiful as they are functional. I couldn't just throw it into any old PC bag. It needed something unique and stylish. I was close to settling for a Marc Jacobs creation when I stumbled across my Knomo in an Apple store. IT was love at first sight. The Knome comes in a high grade, brown leather with a very stylish and soft brown velvet interior. The underside of the fold over flap is a gorgeous rust/ orange color that complements the brown nicely. It also has a tag sewn into the flap that has the serial number of your particular bag printed on it, along with telephones numbers in the US and the UK to call if it is every found. The great thing about this case is it is more like an envelope. It hugs the Air perfectly, fitting like a well worn, favorite glove. Simple and elegant in its design; it is timeless and has already become one of my favorite possessions (along with the Air itself).
#writing #accessories #mac book air
Saturday, August 24, 2013
Inspiration
Inspiration: Diana of course. THe original. The biggest. The baddest of the Big Babes. When I write my MC I think, how would Dina handle herself in this situation? She wouldn't just charge in all brawn and bravado...no, she is careful, and considerate in everything she does: even if what she's doing is handing out a serious ass whipping.
Now, we just need to get her that movie deal....
#Wonder Woman, #Super strength, #Superhero, #Heroine
Excerpt From My Superhero Novel
This is from my debut Novel Earth's First. It details the first appearance of Earth's first, true superhero, and what happens when he crosses path with single mother in an abusive relationship. No ones life will ever be the same after that fateful night.
1
It was during the
dark days when the American government began buying up its country’s giant
technology firms, that the first true superhero appeared. The United States
citizens were growing uneasy; paranoia was beginning to grip the country and
many were whispering of Black Cells and agencies designed to keep an eye on the
people of a once proud nation. Unlike the heroes that followed, he did not come
from some twisted mutation of the flesh; he did not spring into being from a
womb that was destroyed by his birth. No, his arrival was heralded by a single
sonic boom, and a flash of light that turned night to day in the high country
of Maine. His charred and limp form hit the Earth at roughly three times the
speed of a bullet. The resulting heat and shock wave devastated the surrounding
forest. Within a one and a half square mile radius, everything simply
disappeared. Anything that lived was vaporized. Anything that stood was
flattened. On the outer fringe, trees that had been standing when Columbus
stumbled upon the shores, were up rooted and cast outward; flung about as
easily as a child might swipe his arm over a table, scattering his toys. Some
animals, those that were fleet of foot, and had sensed the impending danger,
managed to escape the searing heat blast; others were seared alive, antler,
fur, and bone melting in the outer rings of the concussive blast. The Earth
moaned in response; trembling at the site of the impact. Dirt, sand, leaf and
root all fused into glass. Eyed from above, it would look like someone had
dropped a pebble into the center of a perfectly still pond. But instead of
ripples radiating out, it was heat, nigh irresistible wind, and cosmic debris
that rose in a plume high into the atmosphere.
In the center of it
all, He lay. Motionless, and for the first time in His existence; unconscious. Although
he was unaware of His surroundings, His body began to adapt; to heal. Lungs
that were collapsed and solid in the void of space began to inflate. Arteries
that had retreated into His heart, so as to be unaffected by the vacuum of
space, began to extend throughout His body and down strangely humanoid looking
limbs. The first draw of air into His system activated chemical receptors
buried deep within His brain, analyzing the atmosphere and causing His internal
organ structures to conform and function in Earth’s atmosphere. Skin that had
been horribly charred during his fall through the atmosphere began to heal;
already taking on its natural bronze hue. His skeletal structure had not been
damaged by the impact with the planet's surface, but He had suffered muscle and
tissue damage; although damage that was caused by the impact and damage that
was caused by the events that transpired before were anybody's guess. Either
way, by the time His hearing became active, His body had healed. He opened his
eyes. Protective sheathes that had covered them in space, allowing Him to see
and retain fluid around his orbs, retreated. They were dim, but soon enough
would be pulsing with their normal, brilliant blue sapphire color. He had no
pupils, or iris; in fact, His eyes were nothing more than two solid orbs in His
face that glowed and pulsed with His biorhythms.
He lay there,
looking up into the heavens. There was a time when He could discern the
spectral analysis of stars and entire solar systems if He concentrated hard
enough. But He was not yet sufficiently healed, nor was He aware enough to do
this. Instead, He simply gazed at the stars, not recognizing them for what they
were. He could feel hardness beneath his flesh, but He did not move. He
listened, but there was nothing to hear. Everything for a mile around was
quiet; deafeningly quiet. Had it been possible for Him to experience a chill
travel up His spine he would have. He, one of the most powerful and feared
beings in the universe, lay there, with no knowledge of who or what He was. For
all intents and purposes He was new born; a blank slate that needed to be
imprinted. A brain capable of processing information at a rate incomprehensible
to humans, could formulate but a single thought; "Who am I"?
Slightly pointed
ears, that lay close to His skull detected sound. They moved slightly,
orienting themselves to the source. He could hear the crashing of far away
water cascading over rock, and He could make out the sounds of animals walking;
just starting to peer out of their hiding places, already their dim brains
forgetting what had driven them to flee. He listened to the rhythmical thumping
of their heart rate as it returned to normal. But somewhere, beyond the sounds
of the forest, there was something else. Something that seemed familiar to Him.
He listened more intently. His brain began to shut out all other sound as it
focused. There. Roughly sixty miles south of him. Voices. Human voices, and
they were singing.
He stood. Drawing
Himself up to a full seven feet of height, and then slowly began to walk south.
2
Maura Riley sat in
her pew and prayed.
She wasn't the most
spiritual of persons, but she hadn't quite abandoned hope. Though God knows, if
anyone had a right not to believe, then it was she. It wasn't that she did not
believe in God, she just wondered if maybe He had turned his back on humanity.
What other reason could there be for such wickedness in this world? If she were
truly honest with herself, she needed spirituality in her life. Her problem was
with the message that sometimes came out in the sermon.
She looked around
the room, only half listening to Deacon Myles as he postured and ranted.
Only half the town
was there. Not to worry, the other half had come to the morning sermon.
Had they truly come
out of reverence for the Lord, or were they looking for absolution? She knew
that most of the people sitting around her didn't believe in God. But in the
back of their minds, a small, childish voice would sometimes whisper,
"what if"? What if He did exist? Would He truly forgive the many sins
they committed behind closed doors if they didn't even bother to walk into His
house at least once a week? Could He see the rank filth that played across
their minds? The darkness that hid in the depths? And if He could see that,
then did such things matter to someone who created worlds? Maybe He even put
those things in us; a way of weeding out the unfit, and testing the strong.
Not that she was
perfect. Lord knows she had done her fair share of sinning. There was no
rationalizing some of the things she had done. Looking back, she could blame
some of it on youth. But that excuse could only go so far. What was done in the
past, stayed in the past. All she could do was look forward, and try to move
on. Each day spent hoping against fleeting hope that she would find the
strength to survive another sun up.
She winced. The
bruise on her side, just below the rib cage, ran deep. Sitting still was a
chore for her. Unable to stand and shift her weight as needed, all she could do
was arch her back slightly and take deep breaths. At least it was starting to
fade from blue/black, to phlegm yellow. A good sign. It would be healed soon. If
she were lucky she would get another week, maybe two, before he forgot all the
apologies and promises that he would never hit her again. Maybe if she were
really lucky, and really quiet, she would get a month of respite.
Her mother had
looked at her and simply shrugged and looked away when her daughter asked her
if she had ever been hit before.
"Men are not
like us, baby. They react without thinking. We make them mad, and it is only
natural for them to lash out at times. That's why the Good Father made us
different. We are quieter, more thoughtful. And we are built to take pain. Every
now and then, we are reminded of just how much we can take. But we always heal.
The trick is to not let it poison your mind. Your man doesn't mean to do what
he does. He's always sorry after the fact right? We just have to remember our
place, and like the Good Book says, turn the other cheek."
Turn the other
cheek. That was easy to do. Until one day you look in the mirror and see both
cheeks are bruised. Makeup and oversized sunglasses only go so far. She sighed
to herself and looked over at the slight, hunched form of her mother sitting
beside her.
Is this the life
that her mother had endured for all those years at the hands of her father? The
man had died almost two years ago, and her mother hadn’t spoken of him since. She
had loved him; that much was certain. But Lord knows he could be a mean cuss
when he drank. Many were the nights that Maura remembered him stumbling in,
smelling just this side of a brewery. Her mother would always tell her to just
stay in her room and keep quiet. She remembered listening hard to the muffled
sounds that came from downstairs in the kitchen where her mother would always
greet him. Every now and then she would hear a glass break or a pan hit hard on
the floor. Sometimes her father would shout, and other times she was sure he
was sobbing. Either way, she knew not to go down and see what was happening.
Try as she might, she had no memory of her mother with marks or bruises on her.
Maybe he had never struck her. At least not physically. She remembered
listening to a talk show psychologist one morning and hearing him say that
emotional abuse was still abuse. That scars inflicted by words could take even
longer to heal than those left by fists.
Yeah right. Maura
was certain that the good doctor had never been clapped so hard on the side of
the head that he couldn't hear out of one ear for a week. She winced at the
memory. Unconsciously shifting in her seat to take some of the pressure off her
sore ribs. She ignored the slight glare her fidgeting drew from her mother.
She wasn't feeling
the spirit today. Certainly if it hadn't been for the fact that lately it
seemed like Sunday was the only day of the week she saw her mother, she would
have found a reason to skip service. She tried to focus on the sermon, but
found her mind wandering. She was thinking about Andy and whether or not she
was ready to stay with him and his temper for the rest of her life. How would
her mother react if she told her she was planning to leave him? And if she left
him, where would she go? Her entire life had been lived in the confines of this
small, close-minded town. It and its inbred inhabitants were all she had ever
known. Andy wasn't a bad man, she reasoned. He just had a problem controlling
his anger, and she had a problem with always seeming to provoke it. She was
getting better however. She knew when he was brooding about something, or he'd
had a particularly bad day at the quarry. On those days, she would just put his
supper in front of him without saying a word and go about her business. Careful
not to say too much, and careful to make sure that his drink cup stayed full.
She was also getting
pretty good at reading his signals. Knowing when the laughter was genuine and
when it was a precursor to screaming and cussing. She knew to follow his leads
in conversation, and when it was safe to venture her opinion, as opposed to
just nodding to what he had to say. Most of all, she knew what, and who, not to
speak of. Still, it wasn't always bad. And she figured as long as he kept his
anger focused on her, and not the child that sat cradled on her lap, then
everything was ok.
After the service,
she went back to her car, picked up her babies diaper bag, and headed over to
her mother's SUV. Justin was already fastened into the back car seat, and she
leaned in, kissing him and ruffling his hair.
"You be a good
boy. Mommy loves you, and I'll pick you up tomorrow when I get off work." She
smiled; again amazed at the ache in her heart every time she looked at him.
She looked at her
mother. "Thank you. I'll pick him up at eight. I know it's a pain when I
work a double, but I really could use the extra money."
"Wouldn't need
the extra money if you had a man that worked his fair share."
"Mother. Mama;
please. Not now. I appreciate everything you do, but not now."
Her mother looked at
her with weary eyes. Smiled and raised her hands, brushing back a stray strand
of red hair from her daughters face. "Don't worry. We have all kinds of
fun planned for tonight don't we little one." She smiled at her grandson
in the back seat. "Don't work too hard. You're starting to look thin. Why
don't you go on home after your shift? Get some sleep. I can certainly bring
him to you later on in the day."
Maura smiled at her
mom, and leaned in to kiss her on the cheek. One last wave at her son, and then
she headed back to her car.
She knew her mother
was right. While she might not be sure as to whether or not her man was a good
man, she was certain that he was a lazy man. Granted, she was making good money
as a nurse at county general, but it was all she could do to keep her house up,
diapers on her son and bills paid. To say she was stretching things, trying to
take care of a grown man, was putting it lightly indeed. Lord knows she was
tired. Deep down in her bones tired. While she hated to admit it, she was glad
her mother had offered to keep Justin just a little longer. Recovering from a
double shift was never easy for her, and to be honest, she never slept well
knowing Andy was watching her son. Hell, Andy needed watching just as much as
the little one. She allowed herself a slight smile at that, just as she rounded
a blind curve.
She saw him, or it,
whatever the hell it was, standing in the middle of her lane. She had a brief
moment to register that it looked like a man, but a very tall one, with glowing
eyes that seemed to be looking at her, but not really seeing her. Reflexes took
over, and she slammed on her brakes, while simultaneously wrenching the wheel
to the right. Amazingly, her mind was crystal clear. She knew there was no way
to avoid a collision. There was no panic, no flashing of her life before her
eyes as she felt her car hit the figure head-on at forty miles per hour. Remarkably,
the one thought she had was, "I'm just glad Justin is not in the
car".
Then everything went
black. The impact should have sent the figure flying into her windshield and
then careening off in some obscenely bent mess of shattered bone and torn skin.
Instead, it was like her car had slammed full tilt into a concrete barrier. While
her car may have come to a complete, crumpled stop, she didn't. A body in
motion stays in motion right? The flimsy seat belt snapped as her mass
continued to carry forward. She was blissfully unconscious when she hit the
windshield headfirst―the impact shattering the glass and the front portion of her
skull as well. Shards of glass ripped at her clothing and gouged her skin as
she passed through it. One of her femurs snapped as her lower body made contact
with the steering wheel on her way out of the car. The impact with the pavement
outside of her vehicle would snap the vertebrae in her spine, crush her chest,
and drive shards of her splintered ribs into her still beating heart. Her
nervous system would shut down long before the rest of her body, keeping her
from experiencing any pain or shock. She would never know what if felt like to
have her lungs fill with her own blood, suffocating her in minutes. It would be
one of those painless deaths that she had seen carted time and time again into
the emergency room. She had never really thought such a thing was possible. They
had to feel something, right? Some flash of supreme pain as they passed on,
right? But no, she would leave this world with the last thought in her mind
being one of her beautiful son.
But it didn't happen
that way. She was unconscious and her body was exiting her car through the
front windshield, on the way to its fateful meeting with unforgiving pavement. Then
she stopped, almost in mid air. He caught her with such precision and
gentleness, that he was able to bleed her forward momentum down to nothing as
he turned with her, shielding her already broken body from further damage as
glass, plastic, and steel wrapped around his frame. The nose of the car was
caved in and diving down into the pavement. That caused the rear of the vehicle
to rise up, threatening to flip over onto the pair. He casually lifted one arm
and braced it against the hood of the falling car. A simple shrug of his
shoulder sent the vehicle flying into the thick trees that lined the road.
He looked at the
frail, broken form in his arms. His features, while somewhat humanoid, were
unreadable. He felt no connection to this creature he cradled. No kinship, no
sense of protector-ship. Had his actions been purely reflex he wondered? No,
for some reason he knew that he did what he did because it was the right thing
to do. He did not know where he was, or who he was; he certainly did not know
what this soft, pulpy mass was he cradled, but he knew it to be a living, sentient
being, and as such he could not allow its life to be snuffed out as a result of
his actions. But now what? Instinct told him she was close to expiration, and
even if he knew how, there was nothing he could do to help her sidestep the
abyss. Since he could do nothing to stave off the inevitable, he carried her
gently from the road and into the marsh that surrounded the area. A few hundred
feet into the dense growth, he laid her gently behind the protective covering
of dense shrubs.
He strode away
without a second glance back. In all honesty, as soon as he stepped away from
her he had already forgotten her. Once again, his ears were tuned to the
strange drone of human voices that were still miles away. He wasn't sure how,
but a part of his mind was beginning to decipher the strange clicks and
whistles and translate them into some semblance of a language he could
understand. While he didn’t know how he was doing it, he was actively learning
the English language; and by the time he reached the source, he would be nearly
fluent in its usage.
****
She lay there,
broken and bleeding for almost two full days. The undergrowth where he had
placed her protected her from the sharp eyes of buzzards, hawks and owls that
circled the skies; ever vigilant for a quick and easy meal. While they could
never have scooped her up as easily as they did, the field mice and rabbits
that darted about, they might have been tempted to drop down for a quick
bite; easily mistaking her for a dead thing that for some reason just had
not started to smell yet. She didn't move. Not when snakes and rodents crawled
across her. Not when those pesky Black Flies and no-seeums lit on her and took
long, satisfying drinks from her open flesh. She didn't move. Not even when a
grey Coyote sniffed at her and started to take a lick from one of her wounds,
but for some reason thought better of it and went on about its business. Other
critters gave her a wide berth as well. Where she should have attracted the
attention of scavengers that would have lapped her up, she instead repelled
them. Instinct told them this one was not ripe for the picking. More than that,
biting her might just prove their undoing. So they scampered all about, but
never ventured too close.
At dusk, on the
second day, she sat up.
No struggling, no
wincing from pain. No effort at all. She just sat up, and drew breath deep into
her aching lungs. God that felt good to her. It was as if it was the first
breath of air she had ever drawn. And in some ways it was. Although a bit
confused, Maura was quickly becoming aware of her surroundings. The cool
evening air was already beginning to collect into a fine sheen on her naked
legs. Her Sunday dress, or what was left of it, was near soaked through. She
could feel cold, wet mud caked on one side of her face. Her throat was burning.
Thirst, true thirst, was a bitch. And that bitch was clawing relentlessly at
her from the inside. Her head ached something awful. She reached up and felt
gently. There was a goose egg on her forehead that throbbed and pounded in
response to her hands gentle probing. What had happened to her?
She sat there,
trying to remember, not trusting her legs to get her up off the ground just
yet. She had gotten up early, she remembered. Early enough to have some coffee
and time alone on the front porch before Justin awoke. Justin! Where is he? She
was frantic now, unable to quell the rush of emotions that began to fire
through her. Where was her baby? She looked around, feeling at the ground
around her. But then she remembered; she had taken him to service with her. They
sat with her mother at church; and then, what? Her mother was keeping him. Yes,
that was right. She had packed him into her mother's car and kissed him
goodbye. He was going to stay with Grandma while she worked that night. Work! Oh
no, she thought. I cannot afford to lose that job. How long have I been
lying here? It was late she knew. The sun had almost completely set. If she
hurried, then she could still get to work, and maybe get away with only being
given a verbal for tardiness. But something, some inner clock, told her that
she was a lot later than a couple of hours.
She had to get to
her car, maybe start … and that was when it hit her. Her memory came flooding
back. She had been in her car, and on her way to her evening shift at the
hospital. She had packed a duffel bag with her scrubs in it, so she could go
right from church to the hospital. She had come around a bend. That damned bend
that she was always afraid of, because it was so blind. She always went that
way from church because it cut twenty minutes off her drive. But it was a
dangerous road. It was not frequently travelled, so there was always some form
of road kill littering it; the animals had no fear of crossing it, and she had
always been afraid that one day she would come around that curve and their
would be a big buck standing in the way. But it wasn't a buck she had hit. It
was something else. A man? God, had she hit a person? She remembered a flash of
someone tall and powerfully built standing in the road. But that was it. Everything
after that was not even a blur. There was nothing else swimming around in the
old grey matter, until just a few minutes ago when she had opened her eyes and
sat up.
She got to her feet.
A little more wobbly than she would have liked; but all things considered, she
was happy to stand and be able to take in her surroundings. God her head hurt. She
raised her hand to her forehead to see if she were actively bleeding. Her
vision wasn't blurry and she didn't feel nauseous. That was a good sign at
least. Hopefully she had only whacked her head really good, but hadn't gotten a
concussion. Best she could judge she was a couple of hundred feet from the
road. How long had she been lying out there? Why hadn't someone seen her car in
the road and come to find her? For that matter, how had she gotten so far off
the road? No way she could have been thrown that far. If that had been the case
she would have awakened at the pearly gates. Maybe she had walked into the
woods in shock, and then passed out? Yes. That would explain where she was. But
not why no one had come to look for her. Granted that road was deserted, but it
was still trafficked enough that someone should have spotted the wreckage and
called the local police by now.
Oh God. What about
the …
whatever it was she hit? If that was a man, then he might have been knocked
into the far ditch. At the rate she was travelling, if he survived, then he
would be in pretty bad shape. If he survived. Judging from the shape she found
herself in, that would be a long shot.
She made her way out
of the undergrowth and up onto the side of the road. One hand holding the side
of her pounding head, and the other clutching instinctively at her torn dress,
holding the tattered remnants closed over her breasts. She looked around, but
didn't see her car anywhere. She crossed the road as swiftly as her shaky legs
would let her but still did not see any sign of her wrecked vehicle. She knew
the direction she was coming from and looked along the ditch in the opposite
direction. No sign of a body, and the weeds and vegetation looked undisturbed. Nothing
larger than a field cat or a fox had bounded through. Maybe the police had come
by and had her car towed, and had been unable to find her body. But no, that didn't
really make sense to her at all. She looked at the road, and her eyes were
drawn to two parallel dark stripes that appeared to be burned onto the asphalt.
Those were definitely her skid marks. They were short, and they just stopped. No
veering to the side, no swerve into the ditch. They just stopped. There was no
sign of whatever she had hit, just as there was no sign of her car.
She was starting to
feel uneasy about the whole thing. Her head ached, she really wasn't thinking
clearly, and her throat felt like it was on fire. Self-preservation was
starting to kick in and she began to wonder how she would make it back to her
house. She knew she could cut through the woods, maybe find a house, and it
would definitely take some time off getting back to civilization, but was that
really the best plan of action? In her condition, she wasn't sure she was up
for a cross-country trek. She had a good idea of which way to head, but if she
became disoriented and lost, or worse yet, she really did have a concussion and
passed out, no one would find her and she would probably lay out there and die.
That wasn't an option. She had a son that was depending on her, and dammit, she
was not dying in the woods and leaving that boy to grow up with someone like Andy.
The thought of that made her burn, giving her a quick shot of adrenaline that
helped her steel her resolve. She headed back the way she had come, walking
along the edge of the road. This would take longer, but she had a better shot
of someone coming by and offering help. If only she could find her car, then
maybe her cell phone was still working.
No. Stop thinking
like that she told herself. All those "if onlys" and "what
ifs" and "maybes" were just wasted energy at this point. Put one
foot in front of the other and start moving girl. Before you pass out again,
and end up face first in the middle of Highway 29.
She guessed she had
been walking for about 20 minutes when she heard a car coming from behind her,
heading in the same direction she was walking. She turned and waved
frantically. One hand gripping her torn, mud caked dress, the other waving
stiffly in the air, back and forth over her head. The car swerved and was past
her before she saw the brake lights come on, and it screeched to a halt on the
side of the road. She ran to it, grateful that one, it had not hit her, and
two, it had also stopped for her. She was on her way to the car when she saw
both the passenger and the driver's side car doors open. A man in his late
sixties was driving and he rushed towards her, the concern on his face was easy
to read. A woman of roughly the same age was riding shotgun. A little on the
heavy side, she wasn't quite as quick as her husband to reach her.
"Miss, are you
ok? I almost ran you over!" The man's words were warm and caring. He
reached her just as her legs started to give out, and she tumbled forward into
his arms.
"I… I was in an accident. Just a
ways back up the road." Her words sounded foreign in her ears. Flat, weak,
tremulous. The fire in her throat was making her speech raspy and hard. Like
dried, broken twigs being dragged across scorched pavement.
The man's wife
reached her just as he was steadying her.
"Land sakes,
Charley, she looks about dead!" Her words matched her look; heavy and
rushed, without enough wind behind them to carry them much further than Maura's
ears.
"She said she
was in an accident, a ways back. Did we see a wrecked car back there?"
"Lord knows. What
with the way you drive, it's a wonder we can see anything"
Charley ignored her,
focusing instead on the young woman in his arms. He reached up and kindly
brushed the hair back from her face, noticing the wince when he touched her
forehead. "We need to get her to a hospital. Martha, help me get her to
the car."
"No." Maura's
voice was weak, and she could hear it cracking. "No hospital please. I'll
be ok. I just hit my head when I ran off the road." She looked form one to
the other, taking in the measure of empathy on their faces. These were good
people and they meant well, but she had to get home to her son. She had to make
sure he was ok.
It was Martha who
spoke up first. "I don't know, honey. You look pretty banged up. Looks
like you took quite a lick to the head."
They had made their
way back to the car. An old Crown Victoria with a blessedly big back seat. They
buckled her into it before seating themselves up front.
"Are you sure
we can't take you to the hospital? County General is just a ways up the road,
sweetie." Martha's words were warm and her concern was sincere. She
reminded Maura of her own mother and that thought just made her all the more
anxious to get home. Her mother would be worried sick about her at this point.
"No, thank you,
but I really am starting to feel better. I don't know if it is out of your way,
but if you could just get me home I know I'll be fine. I just need some rest
and a hot bath." The smile she forced made her face feel like it was
cracking in two. But the funny thing was, she really was starting to feel
better. Her throat was still aching, but her head had settled down to a dull
roar. The little bit of walking she had done before Charley and Martha had come
along had obviously helped loosen her aching joints, because the stiffness in
her hips and lower back had lessened considerably. "If you can just drop
me at my house, then I'll be more than happy to pay you."
"Oh hush
now," Charley said. "We'll have none of that. You're just lucky we
came along when we did. We'll drop you anywhere you like."
She thanked him and
gave him her address before sinking back into the stiff but embracing faux
leather of their old Ford.
It had taken
multiple assurances from Maura, that she didn't need a hospital on the way
home. Finally, when she had told them that she was a registered nurse, they
seemed to ease up on her a little. She promised them that she would have
herself checked over when she reported for work.
They dropped her off
at her front door, and again refused any type of payment. Seeing Andy's jeep
wrangler in the drive, she assured them she would be fine for the night. She couldn't
thank them enough, and again apologized for having taken them so far out of
their way. She watched them as they pulled away and disappeared down the road. She
looked at the front door to her house, then at the jeep sitting in the drive,
and back to the front door and took a deep breath. What was the likelihood he
would let her take the jeep to pick up Justin? She would just have to call her
mother and ask her to bring her baby back to her. Legs heavy, she walked up the
steps to the porch and opened the door.
Stepping into the
small entryway, she was met with both the blaring sound of heavy metal being
blasted from the stereo in the family room, and the pungent smell of burning
weed that permeated the entire first floor. Jesus and God, she had told him
about smoking that shit in her house. And that music was bringing back the
headache that she had only just begun to realize was gone. Nice to see I was
missed, she thought.
She walked into the
kitchen to find Andy bent over the counter making a sandwich. He looked up at
her, mouth dropping open as if he had seen a ghost.
"Maura? Where
the fuck have you been woman? Everyone and their fucking brother has been
calling looking for you."
She ignored the
cursing. She had long since giving up on trying to clean up his vocabulary,
only making the effort now when he would swear in front of Justin.
"I was in a car
accident. Out on Highway 29. I hit… something. Ran off the road. Must
have knocked myself out."
Andy looked at her. If
there had been a look of concern on his face, then it was creeping away. Replaced
instead with his usual look of annoyance. "A wreck? Is the car ok? Goddammit,
I just put new brakes on that thing for you."
Now it was Maura's
turn to be annoyed. Usually she would have let this slip, but was not in the
mood for it right now. "No, Andy, the car is not ok. But don't worry, I'm
fine. Can I please have some water."
He winced at her
words, but still made no effort to apologize or act concerned as she made her
way to the kitchen table.
"The hospitals
been calling for you for two days now. Said you never showed up for work. Your
mamma's calling too. Keeps going on about calling the police on me if I
couldn't tell her where you was. Fucking bitch. She needs to mind her―"
Maura cut him off. Turning
to face him. "What did you say? How long have I been gone?"
Andy looked at her,
cocking his head to one side. "You been gone two days, Maura. And if you
didn't call into work, then I'm betting they will fire your ass. You better not
end up getting fired cause you didn't have sense enough to call out."
She couldn't contain
the anger that she suddenly felt well up inside of her. Two days? Was that
possible? And if she had been unconscious for two days, why the hell had he not
come looking for her? "I was in a car accident, Andy! How the hell could I
call out if I were unconscious?"
"You mean to
tell me you been knocked out for two days somewhere," he shot back at her.
"Hell, if that was the case, then you'd be dead! And look at ya, not
hardly a scratch on you? You don't look like you were in some Godawful
accident. And just so you know, I called the State troopers to see if there
were any accidents called in, and they said no." He was eyeing her now. Annoyance
was giving way to suspicion.
"Andy, please. I
am really not up for this right now. I need to call my mother and let her know
I'm ok. Did she bring Justin by?"
"No. Bitch said
she would keep him till you showed up. She said if you didn't call her by
tomorrow, then she was calling the police on me cause she thinks I did
something to you. She is convinced I've gotten rid of you. Especially since you
didn't show up at the hospital, and you didn't show up to pick up your Goddamn
brat."
She looked at him;
anger growing inside of her. What in God's Good Name had she ever seen in him? His
beady eyes were narrowed and red. The pot was dimming them and his brain.
He moved closer to
her. Slowly moving across the kitchen floor until he was only steps from her. Now
she could smell not only marijuana coming off him, but beer as well. She had
been missing for two days and he was working on a bender. What did that tell
her?
"And here you
stand now. Saying that you was in a bad car wreck that knocked you out, but not
a mark on you. Your hairs all wild, and your dress is barely hanging on
you." The look in his eyes worried her and she backed up, reaching for the
counter behind her to steady her as he advanced. "You ain't been in no
accident. Where the fuck have you really been? You been laid up somewhere with
somebody else?"
Suddenly, the fear
that had been creeping into her was replaced by a fury she had never known. How
dare he say this to her?
"You ignorant
bastard," she hissed. "How dare you?" Her voice trembled and she
locked eyes with him, for once not looking at the floor when he bulled his way
into her personal space. "You know, if I had any sense I would have 'laid
up' with someone a long damn time ago. Anyone would have been better than your
lazy, worthless, small dicked useless excuse for a man! I want you out of my
house!"
Instantly she
regretted what she had said. His eyes were wild with anger now, and she knew
what was coming.
"You fucking,
ungrateful whore!" She could feel the spittle hitting her face, and she
closed her eyes, sensing the blow that was coming.
It was an open
handed, back hand slap to the right side of her face that rattled her teeth. She
was braced for it, and he hadn't held back. The last time he hit her like that,
she had gone deaf for a week. But this time, she barely felt it. The aching in
her head was residual from the accident. But the slap had hardly registered. She
looked at him. His face red and contorted with dark rage. She looked at him and
she laughed. His eyes widened in surprise, but only for a second. Then he drew
back his fist and she knew he was not going to pull this one. It was a punch
that was aimed straight at her jaw. She heard the pop as it landed and was
expecting to feel the cold, hard linoleum rush up to greet her. But she didn't
fall. The pain she was expecting wasn't there either. She raised her
hands, grabbing him by the front of his shirt.
She pulled him in close to her. Looked him in
the eyes. "I said, I want you OUT OF MY HOUSE!" And she pushed him. Only,
he didn't step back away from her. Instead, he flew across the kitchen and into
the refrigerator on the opposite wall from them. The impact shook the walls,
knocking the small, framed pictures of roosters that lined the walls from their
hooks.
She was in shock and
looked down at her trembling hands. Then she looked up at Andy as he was just
starting to get to his feet. He had hit the fridge so hard it was knocked
sideways and the door had flown open. The look in his eyes was different this
time, and was one she was not familiar with. He made his way to his feet, not
once breaking his gaze with her. "You crazy bitch," he said. Fear
made his voice break. "You're fucking on crack ain't you? You've been out
whoring and smoking crack with some low life, and then you show up here and
pull this shit!" He was on his feet now and moving away from her towards
the hall.
"You want me
out, well you got it," he yelled from the hall. She could hear him snatch
up his keys from the sideboard in the entryway. She was still looking at her
hands, only half listening to what he was saying.
"I am out of
here, you fucking bitch! You don't have to worry about ever seeing me again! Or
my son!"
She heard the slam
of the jeep door and the engine turning over before she processed what he said.
"Justin," she whispered into the emptiness of the kitchen. "No"!
She was through the
hall and out onto the porch just in time to see his back tail lights disappear
out the drive in a shower of gravel and dirt. She didn't think, she didn't
question what needed to be done. Driven by the thought of protecting her son,
she ran after him.
She was off the
porch and down the road without even realizing she had taken the first step. For
some reason, the jeep that had seemed so far away was not really that far from
her. As a matter of fact, it was getting closer to her. No, that wasn't right. She
was getting closer to it. She was only vaguely aware of the fact that her legs
were pumping insanely hard, propelling her closer to the jeep. So close, as a
matter of fact, that she could now reach out and touch the bumper. And she did
touch it. Grabbing ahold of it and digging her feet into the asphalt. She felt
the car lurch, but then a strange thing happened. The bumper came off in her
hands and the jeep jumped forward, continuing down the road. She tossed the
bumper aside and ran even harder. Then she was alongside the jeep on the driver
side, and could see the incredulous look on Andy's face as he saw her outside
his driver side window. Before he could swerve into her, she lowered her
shoulder and rammed the jeep. To her surprise, it began to tilt up onto two
wheels. Before it could come back down she hit it again. This time driving it
up and over and into the ditch. Rage coursed through her as she approached it
and punched through the front windshield, grabbing the father of her son and
pulling him out of the vehicle.
She hauled the
frightened, disoriented form of the man she once thought she loved out through
the front of the jeep. She held him out in front of her, both of his feet
dangling in the air; not unlike the way a loving parent might raise their
laughing child into the air, holding onto their arms or chest. That was how she
thought of this man she hated right now. Only he was a very bad little boy that
needed scolding.
"You listen to
me you little asshole!" The fury in her voice matched that in her eyes. "Don't
you ever come near me or my son again! As of right now we are finished, and we
don't ever need to lay eyes on one another again. Do you understand me?"
Andy laughed. Held
aloft, his limp body racked with labored breathing that told Maura he had
probably cracked a couple of ribs in the roll over. "You stupid
bitch," he spat down at her. "I don't know what kind of freak shit
you've gotten into, but you are definitely some kind of fucking freak right
now! And you know what? No one is going to give custody of a child to a fucking
freak!" Despite herself, Maura felt his works sting at her. They lashed at
her in the same way that his stinging backhands used to. He smiled down at her,
coughing with each breath. "I may not want the little bastard, but I will
make good and damn sure you never get him."
The coldness of his
words, and the meaning behind them, shook her to her very soul. Rage and fury
were replaced with fear.
"No," she
said, "you will not touch him!" For added emphasize she shook him. But
rather than the fear she was hoping to hear in his voice, she heard a
resounding pop as his neck snapped, and bones in his arms cracked in her grasp.
He was dead before his limp body hit the ground when she dropped him.
"My God. What
have I done?" She looked down at her hands. Shock began to circulate
through her body as the realization of what had just happened began to sink in.
What was happening to her? He had felt like a rag doll in her hands. A grown
man that easily weighed a buck ninety was like putty in her hands. She had the
feeling that her shake had done a little more than snap his neck.
When the state
troopers received the call about a rolled Jeep on a back woods stretch of
highway, they would find his body lying pinned under his jeep; the massive
internal damage to his soft tissue organs would be attributed to the enormous
weight of the jeep rolling over onto his body. Case closed. Another drunk
driver added to their highway death toll. When they would try to notify his
long term girlfriend, and mother of his child, they would not be able to reach
her by phone, and the hospital she worked at had terminated her employment for
failing to report to work. A drive out to her small house, a couple of miles
back of the accident, would reveal the signs of a struggle and plenty of
contraband. But the woman known as Maura Riley was nowhere to be found.
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